I love the way everyone has a moment in this, and every little moment shows a perfect slice of personality, Anderson hiding outside, Stephen being a pain on the couch... Rachel and Ana's interactions and reactions frame the whole story wonderfully and make me wonder more about what is going on inside and out.
Plus, the whole last part is perfect, especially the last few lines. It's all so sweet and awkward and it.
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Date: 2010-02-17 05:41 am (UTC)I love the way everyone has a moment in this, and every little moment shows a perfect slice of personality, Anderson hiding outside, Stephen being a pain on the couch... Rachel and Ana's interactions and reactions frame the whole story wonderfully and make me wonder more about what is going on inside and out.
Plus, the whole last part is perfect, especially the last few lines. It's all so sweet and awkward and it.
Thank you so very much! This is great! :D
[But where was that dog hiding the whole time?]